You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Win 1.5 SBDs in VDux's Haiku Contest About FoodView the full contextView the direct parentvdux (61)in #contest • 6 years ago Nice! Thank you! next = two syllables?
i counted meal as two syllables, no?
so I looked it up and meal is one syllable. gonna switch that one up a bit, and here is the correction. I like it much better! thx for finding that.
My creatures all fed,
I tackle the next repast.
Leftovers or not?
Leftovers always! Good enough the first day, good enough the next!