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Fiction Story : The Adventure of Gogo

My name is Gogo, this is my adventure story when met robot. the struggle is very interesting, because it gives precious memories and also gives a good lesson for my life.

Slowly I walked up an alley. With an anxious and worried face I occasionally hid into the sidelines of the wall when someone was passing by. I keep walking carefully. "Raise your hands!" Suddenly there was a group of people behind me who pointed their guns. I was led to a place in a chained arm. "Hurry up!" Said someone who held the chain and hit me with a shotgun. I can not fight them. They're pretty tough with robot keepers all around.

"Come in!" He said as he pushed me into the iron bars.
I noticed the man was chatting with someone through the hologram clock.

"Yes sir. We have captured another prisoner, "the man said.

"Hey! Let me go! Why did you catch me? "Said a man in a jail next door.

"Shut up!" Said the villain whose voice was echoing in this narrow space.

"Shut up," he told a robot.

Then he resumed his conversation while a robot fired a sticky gun into his mouth.

"Yes sir ready." He continued.

"Bring him with me. Our master needs it sooner.

"They went with the man in prison. I just paused to see all that fear began to envelop me and I could only sit while hugging my feet that felt cold.

Hey, "someone said in my nearby prison. I just turned with a sad face.

"What's your name?" He asked. Little by little his face was visible from behind the darkness.

"Do not be afraid. What kind of friend are you? "He asked again.

..I .. I am Gogo. Who are you? "I say haltingly.
"Introduce my name Ilham and that's my twin sister Widya," she said, pointing to a girl.

"Twi ... Twins?" I said.

"Yes," he replied.

"You seem to look scared," he continued.

"Hmm .. Maybe," I said, obviously a little frightened.

"Take it easy. We will surely be saved. "He said so confidently.

In the evenings the atmosphere is so quiet in the prison hallways. Dim lights with dark sides around them. The air that felt cold and stuffy seemed to complement me in this prison. I really like a quiet night because I can watch the stars scattered across the sky without being disturbed by anyone but not in this condition locked in a stuffy prison. I can only stare at the window with the iron bars from behind the brick walls that are fragile and moist. Suddenly someone emerged from the hallway door just in front of my quarry from his characteristic. I was sure the man was one of those friends who caught me.

"Who are they with?" My heart wonders. The man brought a beautiful woman who also wore the same uniform carrying a large plastic bag. They went to the jail next to me where Ilham was. "Hey wake up all !!" shouted the man earlier. Inspiration sleeping instantly awakened as well as his twin brother. "Here!" He said as he put something in front of his prison. Then they kept moving away while putting the same thing into every prison he passed.

"Wait a minute," said the beautiful woman who was with the man.

"What's up?" He asked.

"We're forgetting someone," the woman said to me directly.

Then the woman returned to me with the same thing they put in front of the prison.

"It's for you," he said with a sweet smile and then he went back to the man.

I took it with my hand and watched it look like a box.

"Do not be surprised it's just food," says Ilham. They were gone. The quiet atmosphere is now re-rowdy with the sound of the dining box opened. I too slowly opened the box and immediately devoured its contents. "Good," said Ilham so quietly. I just turned my head at him. I saw inside the lunchbox that was not food but a pistol. 2 pieces of watches and some other tools that I do not know his name. I am surprised. Wonder and curious to see it.

"Gogo, here are the tools that will get us out of here," he said in a whisper and approached me. "I do not understand," I said.

"Do not think about it after I'm out I'll tell you everything." He replied casually.

"Then how will you eat?" I asked.

"I'll eat with my twins," she replied. I went back to eat my food.

The next day I was awakened by Inspiration he was so enthusiastic and excited about this day maybe because he wanted to break free. Once again the people who last night fed us back and fed the box. Like last night they shared it that beautiful women gave it to me and that fierce man gave it to Ilham. Somehow the beautiful woman always smiled when giving it to me what is possible.

"Ah..So I do not want to think about it," I told myself.
They went back. I immediately ate the food.

"Gogo! Do not eat it, "said Ilham.

I immediately stopped my hand. "Why?" I asked.

"Dont too much asking. Put that food back, "he said.

"Later after the others have finished eating we will free ourselves ..." he continued.

"What to do with me forbidden to eat? Not after this meal he will set us free. "I told myself. "Gogo ?!" he surprised me.

"Yes?" I asked.

"Do you hear what I'm talking about?" He asked.
"Talk what?" I asked in surprise.

"Listen to me. Widya come here, "he said directly the two people.

"After you finish eating Gogo you should try to unlock this prison using this tool while I try to distract the robots on guard and Widya you also have to try to unlock our prison then if there is time to open another prison. Okay all? "He explained. "Hmm .. I'll try," I said.

Everyone in this prison finished eating. It's time to act. "Hey robot. Let me go. I want to go to the toilet, "said Ilham. Then the robots were delivered Ilham. I just tried to unlock this prison but I do not know how to use this tool. Then I noticed Widya wearing it I followed him and succeeded. Appeared Widya thumbs up my thumb then so with alacrity Widya directly out followed by me and immediately fired at the robots while I tried to open another prison but unlucky robot robot began to sound.

"Gogo. Come on! "Said Ilham from a distance while Widya keep watch.

"But ..." I said.

"Come on, quickly! We do not have time to free everyone, "said Ilham.

I immediately rushed off and the three of us tried to be as unobtrusive as to who and what were out there but some robots saw us. We also tried to avoid every shot. While Widya handed the gun to Ilham and Ilham tried to shoot him. Suddenly several other robots came from the front.

"Inspiration. In front there are many more robots, "I told Ilham.

"Keep on running, do not stop," Ilham said.

We kept running no matter what happened but instantly the robots fell down whoever fired at it but it was clear that Ilham seemed to just shoot the robot behind. We reached a door. I opened the door.

"How about this? In front of us is a river, "I said.

"Jump over there," said Ilham.

"What?" I asked in surprise.

"Hurry up!" Shouted Ilham.

"But...." I said.
"Hurry .. Come on!" Said Widya who from yesterday he just silence now he voiced.

I was even more surprised while Widya immediately plunged into the river.

"Widya ..." I yelled.

"Quick follow Widya!" Said Ilham getting closer to me who was behind.

"What if ..." I said.

Ilham also directly throw themselves into the river they look no further on the surface. I am getting pressed and unable to think clearly when the robots are getting closer. "How is this?" He asked more confused. "Ah ... I'm good to throw myself too," I immediately dropped into the river. I saw the robots and they did not seem to be able to swim but suddenly the rockets flashed from their backs and they flew over the river and started looking for us while I began to sink and run out of air.

after that, suddenly I have arrived at my house. I looked at my mother with an uneasy face. then I "why do you look uneasy?" my mother replied "You have fainted a few days after being found stranded in the river, fortunately your life can still be saved.My mother hugged me tightly, then I told my story to my mother, but I still ask" where is Ilham & widia? ".

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Nice story buddy, I like your story. Thanks!

Are you wellcome.

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Thanks for sharing nice story, steem on!

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I like your story, thanks for sharing buddy!

Great story. I like this one, thanks buddy!

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Thanks you.

Thanks for sharing a good story!

Are you wellcome.

Why you not yet upvote this story bg @xpilar?