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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #10: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Hello everybody. Here's my short story. I hope you like.


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The sunset of love

Daniel was 62 years old and fell in love with Mary, a 21-year-old girl. They decided to live together. Everything seemed perfect. Until three years later, he had a heart attack and for his treatment, he could not please her in bed as before.

One day, he came home early and he heard moans and voices in his bedroom. He felt immense frustration and anger and decided to wait for them to leave the room.

Daniel looked for a gun on the desk in his studio and waited for them at the door. When he saw the man, he shot him and so he told her: "I gave you all my love and trust,If you had wanted to leave, I would have let you go. Because with you, I enjoyed my last years as a fiery lover, instead of having chosen someone to share old age with me with little passion, but with a lot of love and understanding". He hit her and after she was unconscious, he strangled her.

The newspapers referred the crime with the following title: "65-year-old man killed the murderer and rapist of his couple before he escaped."

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I liked it, very good

very good!!!!!!