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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #28: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

In one night on the road a car was driving calmly .. It was that of 11pm, when suddenly saw a child beckoning everything beaten and bloodied .. A very dark place, half a hill and near a ravine. Without thinking, the driver stopped and started shouting at the child that he would not run, that he was going to help him.
The child ignored him walked quickly towards a ravine and the chauffeur followed him already with fear through the darkness. The boy kept going down just turning to see if the driver was following him. When the driver got to the bottom, he saw a broken car and the body of a child nearby.
Later he saw the body of a woman still alive but unconscious immediately called the emergency service. The equipment arrived and they went to rescue the woman, unfortunately the child died at the moment of the accident .. When the driver returned to his car in the passenger seat was the ghost child the same one of the accident ..

  • He looked at him and smiled, and only told him.
  • "Thank you" and disappeared ...