RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 15: (Original Contest)

[zachaizelle0813]

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Suicide

How good it must be
To bear all the pain at once
Then never again

Comments

[likedeeler]

Beautiful, BUT:

Remorse

How can you know that
you won´t feel the eternal
flames´ licking remorse? 😉

[prydefoltz]

Clever haiku ... great word play.

[likedeeler]

Thank you!
Yes, I´m pleased as punch with that one. 😎

[moonleesteem]

Welcome @zachaizelle0813,
Very Poetic and real... we enjoyed it
Good Luck 🍀

[zachaizelle0813]

Thank you very much for warm welcome @moonleesteem 💕
My first time to join this contest. 😥

[calluna]

This is beautiful! This haiku is like a pebble dropped in a pond, it's ripples can reach far beyond its original words <3

[zachaizelle0813]

Thank you @calluna 💗💗💗

[prydefoltz]

A heart shattered. Great haiku:0

[zachaizelle0813]

Indeed, a shattered heart that never appreciated by the one she loved.
Thanks @prydefoltz 💕