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RE: Friday Poets, Round 9, Contest and Community Building

in #contest6 years ago

Happy day for everyone! Here my contribution:
"All eyes were false"

https://steemit.com/poetry/@zeleiracordero/all-eyes-were-false-original-poem-prydefoltz

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There is a lack of hope in the life you are facing. Try to sing again, redraw the joy in the rainbow, furrowing the blue sky. Go back to live with illusion.

Life is seen with the optics of each one. It does not have a single form and there are no recipes to live it. The important thing is to find our voice and look at the world with our own eyes, from our essence. ¡Thanks for the comment of your impression, my brother!

Hi, @zeleiracordero. I loved the way your poem feels sincere, strong and tender, all at once.

My comment on your post:

Such heartfelt lines honor our gender, dear @zeleiracordero.
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Beautiful!