Hello @surfermarly.
See below my second entry.
I changed the look of the logo. and would like to know what you think.
Thanks and have a great day
https://steemit.com/art/@apprentice001/second-entry-into-dreams-of-the-ocean-logo-design-surfermarly-s-new-charity-project
Nice! The only thing that wouldn't work here are these colour gradients. They generally can't be used for logos, since a logo always needs to be used in several formats, including print works. The gradients would be very pixelated then. I'd rather prefer a logo with a clean shape though :-)
Thanks for the feedback. Did not know that color gradients would not be ideal for logo design. I learnt something new. I removed the color gradients from my logo:
https://steemit.com/art/@apprentice001/entry-into-dreams-of-the-ocean-logo-design-surfermarly-s-new-charity-project
I will keep what you said in mind when I design logo going forward. Thanks and have a great day!