Excellent stuff again. You got a real unique way of writing. It's like a painting or something. My favorite lines:
The echo of her rapid decent fading, the muffled sounds of activity in the building and traffic outside replacing the loud echoes. No silence in the city.
I don't know, you got a way with words. Good Stuff.
I was told all through school that I wrote in pictures...thanks for that affirmation ✌️