Ooooh, what a neat concept.
I really like the way you described the activity in the beginning of the story. That sounds exactly like what people do. Have you ever tried being in a crowded place and just pointing at the sky with a shocked expression? That's what your story reminded me of. People react just how you'd expect them to. They all stand around looking for whatever has you riled up. :-)
I think this could be a great story to expand on. I could even see it as a movie some day!
Thanks! I think I will think of some more details and mabey write a more detailed story with the same concept.
Be sure to let me know when you do! I'd love to read it. :-D
I will!