Good article. I agree a lot can be learned between the good and the bad whitepapers. I posted an article (https://steemit.com/ico/@bjt34/current-ico-s-falconcoin-cybermiles) on two icos I’m following and I see quite a few red flags on one of them. The white paper was a big one of those.
Follow me and I’ll be posting more info on these in the coming days.