Please consider editing/revising this post ASAP. I understand you are new to Steemit - However plagiarism is rarely tolerated in any facet of life. There are bots on Steemit that search for plagiarism and this post even has the same title as the original author used.
@cheetahbot is one of the plagiarism bots on Steemit
I am not attempting to police this post - I am trying to give you another chance to make right on it.
Sincerely @krytonika