You write very well in my opinion. It's a pity there's so little support so far... But keep going, you can drown in your story in a good way.
I was at school that day. The news didn't stop showing the event, even though it wasn't my country. We didn't understand anything at all. It looked like surrealism. Later I realized that there would be many such moments in my life... When you move, it's like being in water.
Take care of yourself!
!PIZZA
Thank you for the kind words.
And I agree- sadly, it seems as though the term "terrorist attack" became much more common across the world after that day.
That's true...