I think you have a good thing going here...but I have a lot to learn to even come close to what you're looking for, I still need a lot of work I am still making way too many errors in my writing. The stories are there it's just getting them out and written correctly. Incidentally, those at the Fiction Workshop are great! they are helping me learn to correct my mistakes and learn to write more fluently. To them, I say thank you!
upvoted and resteemed!