I've been thinking about fixing some of my older poems too to make them a bit less awkward. But I fear it might break authenticity, or at worst, my own person. It's like trying to rewrite who I was.
Maybe it's OK . I don't really know.
It's like I never lost that angst after all. Scary thought.
You can keep the original and then write rewrite as you would today. It would be a fun comparison and you don't loose the teen you.
Hmm... I'll be sure to at least give it a try so thanks! 🙂