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RE: Dead Posts Bobbing in the Blockchain, a Dead Poem Society Contest

in #deadpoemssociety7 years ago (edited)

Interesting proposal, Pryde. I'll see if I can take advantage of this opportunity you graciously offer.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@zeleiracordero/corresponding-rhetoric-original-poem-100-days-poetry-challenge-day-24

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It was an amazing read. It changed the hairstyle of my soul a little.

Thanks, poet! It is a pleasure to have disheveled your soul.

Sometimes whispers bend before the wind,
they rise and they crash
against steel clouds

Splendid work, zeleira:) Good luck in the contest:) Be sure to vote for some other poets:)

What follows this singing of owls?
Your reflectors dazzled my faith
with that extravagant ego parade
ancestral, naked.

*love this part- hits me right in the feels xo

I feel your sensitivity as a great source in which it is an enjoyment to immerse yourself. Thanks for reading and the empathic insight into the poem, @kilbride.