Moon Landing Poster - Steemit Graphic Design Chronicle #5

in #design7 years ago (edited)

Hey guys,

Thanks for coming back to my posts. I enjoy having an audience that allows some space for feedback and contemplation on design.
On this very fine day, I'm sharing with you a very recent poster that I made for a Telegram group called Supreme Pumps.

What I did, as you can probably guess, was to integrate their logo/brand on the flag and make it look like it was the original flag that was planted on the moon!

I'd be curious to know if anyone thinks there are elements that can be changed to make the flag look even more realistic. Or does it look realistic?

Before
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After
Moon 001.jpg

I'd love to hear some feedback from you guys on this.
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Hmmm well the small waves on the flag are realistic but you should add much bigger waves too because else it looks like the flag is a bit rigid. And a rigid flag is not common :D

Haha true, thanks so much for your feedback!
I just updated the post with what it looked like before. I think now it's more interesting to observe

One small step for peon,
One giant leap for Orckind.

Not bad!

Lol sorry I dont think I get the reference.

Looks pretty good like only thing I think the flag could do with some more waves to it and as well you should of maybe put a shadow against the spaceman too. When you look at the real photo I don`t understand why he does not have a shadow aligned to him like the other objects in the photo.

That made me think a lot about the original image's originality, I think the spaceman was cut into it, and perhaps the American flag as well.

I think where they realised they balls up was a waving flag with no atmosphere. I watched one documentary about NASA when Obama was visiting there. The cameraman messed the live shot up as it showed Obama walking passed the fake inside section of the International Space Station. I don`t even think there is a International Space Station at all. Always sense the Goverments create myths to hide their lies.

That's a marvellous observation about the atmosphere. Is it windy on the Moon actually?

And yeah I must say I need to look more into that field but I've also heard about the theatrical performances related to space.
In the end I guess it's only Elon who really does it xD

There is not meant to be any atmosphere on the moon but will we ever know cos I think a real event of a moon landing has never been done. The thing with the moon you dunno if it is actually a solid object or it could be just an illusion to the human eye down here on planet earth. We have a whole universe out there but 99% of us only focus and study on one planet otherwards where we are now. I think a lot of the knowledge we have been fed on the universe is based on myth and lies.

I totally agree with you on your skeptic approach. Would you be up to go on Mars One mission?

Only Mars mission I would be on would be eating a chocolate bar of Mars haha. I don`t think the Mars One mission would be on my agenda especially if it is a one way ticket too.I dunno what kind of toxic chemicals they have on Mars and your life might be shorter on there than it is on planet earth.