RE: eat good food and lose weight: you just gotta eat the right thing

[grammarnazi]

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

The danger of this diet is that you really shouldn't adapt it in the long term because well, your cholesterol will eventually go through the roof.

It should be in the long run instead of in the long term.

Comments

[gooddream]

wow, you are fast. You sure about that? Maybe it just needs to be hyphenated?

[kwadjobonsu]

it's a bot

[gooddream]

yes, i see that now. hehe