They're all fine, it doesn't matter. Though I really enjoy you sci-fi stories. It made me start my own series. Please give it a read if you get the chance, it would mean so much to me to get some feedback from you to make some more improvements to my writings. https://steemit.com/vikings/@aquaman22j/d-and-d-campaign-life-of-morrak-chapter-1-how-did-we-get-here-balron
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I upvoted your story as I liked it. My English is not sufficient to judge the style but I liked it in general.