I'm a big fan of your work the colors are perfectly done and I like the fact that you care for small details and I'll be glad to hear your opinion about my work here is the link and hope you'll enjoy it :)
https://steemit.com/art/@othmanesl/harry-potter-drawing
Hey, you got a good eye. I'd suggest with your style you could benifit from trying charcoal and a good paper like Strathmore Bristol Vellum. With these you'll be able to take your drawings to the next level and build on your skills. What your drawing with now, a hard graphite and a smooth paper is actually really difficult!
Check out my post for some pointers with working in charcoal, i reckon it might work with your style!
https://steemit.com/art/@groundcontrol/drawing-a-study-of-rembrandt-s-eye-in-charcoal-step-by-step-original-content
your right thanks for the tips I'll try it the next time :)