Oohhh an adventurous boy! He seems so happy to traverse in the tunnel that connects to another world?! So brave, or maybe he doesn't know that yet?
I like the lighting implication that you gave on this sketch.
And you should definitely finish your stories! I am still awaiting for the conclusion to Doctor Kett and the boy with Mr Fox and the woman who has to kill every full moon or sommit.
Um... I donno if he knows, maybe he does? I think this James when he has grown up and he remembered Mr. Fox's world and is trying to re-find his way there? .... Not sure...
And yes, I should try to finish one of those stories XD haha~