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RE: Poem - Wave Shaped Walls - Dsound Reading - Freewrite, Prompt - Big wave

in #dsound7 years ago (edited)

I love the consistency in your lines and how you kept the wants flowing. I particularly loved this three lines.

into the future,
sweating an ocean
of angry emotion,

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Really glad you digged the poem abmakko. Any sea related poem just flies out of me and usually flows naturally as it's the place I like the most. Born in the wrong body mate, I should have been a dolphin lol Thanks for reading :-)