I listen to the music on dsound. Though it was perfect mixture for beginner as you said. The beat has overwhelmed the wordings or lyric, i could call it. And i could only hear same sound repeated all through. I believe raping is just alittle bit different from poetry in the real sense of it; they both posesses some set of features.
Note this, your voice is so audible. I bet it wasnt studio voice. Rhythm and rhyme schemes is best employed when it comes to rap.
You should try and let the lyric be thirty line long, i believe with that you should make more than just 3minute you mentioned and you should let it be coherent. Remember the rhyme does matter most so also the title of the song. I'm honor putting this short comment. I wish, it would be welcome by you.
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