Cradle earth, sky tomb
original poetry & photoswith reading
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Cradle earth, sky tomb
What do you see in my eyes
Of the wandering phoenix?
What did you read
From my book of bone?
(Etching in modular paneling
Layered accross time)
What did you see in your flight
Over dream meadows in the lingering twilight?
Did you write it on parchment
Or on bark that floats
On the dawn ocean?
Show me the beginning of one chapter:
Draw the shape of life's end
In love's genesis.
Show me the meaning
Of your desire; paint inside
My mind in silence the intention
Dress the vision
In costumes from mythology
In colors from a different world
That make me feel unreal emotions
Not written about
Secret feelings that
Protect their existence
From the lips of the profane
Teach me the way of marrow;
Make me an unctious factory
Of verse quintessential.
Take the flame meandering,
Cull my idle thoughts;
Show the script bewildering
To the lover that was lost.
Poise the questions penned
There & then, gauge the reply:
And fasten the remarks
To my tomb upon the sky.
Notes
Original poetry written by @d-pend for Steemit and Dsound on February 19, 2018. This one is something of a dreamscape, concerning the magical nature of our incarnation here on Earth and its relation to the vaster reality which escapes our logical comprehension. There is a discontinuity analogous to dreams in the way the poem switches from directly questioning the "other" to making requests of it, and ends with referring to it in third person. The photos were taken by me on hiking trails near Holy Cross Church in Valle Crucis, NC with iPhone 5S and edited using Lunapic.
Written & spoken
By @d-pend
2/19/18
Photos takenWith iPhone 5S &
Edited with Lunapic
d-pend I consider you
Brother in the "grief", lover of silence and his company, treasure hunter in the mud and garbage. Photographer of lives he longs for and never had, wandering among dreams without stopping at any, wonderful creature that finds distance in the vicinity, which dodges the wind and rain to stay with the air and water. Sad human artist, cheerful, nostalgic thirsting for memory in the deserts of oblivion. Alma written in verse, hands of irrational paper. Do not stop turning life into words and dreams. Be happy and be eternal, poet.
Life is mortal while Love is forever and ever because it belongs to spirituality. To me this is the pure depiction of the love in these lines,
Secret feelings that
Protect their existence
From the lips of the profane
I did not know that you are that much skilled photographer too my friend @d-pend <3
As I said before you seem like a man of substance. You think differently, unlike other people. You have a strong mind. I had to reread to understand the depth of the poem. Brilliant writing. Also, you're great at photography. :)
This particular poem of yours is reminiscent of native-American cultures. The tomb in the sky image makes me feel so. There are powerful phrases like "Cull my idle thoughts;". What is transcendental meditation if not culling idle thoughts? My vote.
Hi @d-pend, Extremely Amazing creations. Your Dsound production giving spirituality same version of poetry. Your lyrics carrying to me various world always when I read it. Talented and native skills generate excellent poem. This one is the best contribution to steemit. It's a concerning the magical nature. Look at poem.....how introduce main title from poetry. Denotation and connotation are both terms that are very important in poetry, especially when you're writing it, because they can determine the meaning of your words and assist to set the tone of the poem. Your every poems seems deepest thoughtful indeed. It gives up more motivation. I have low poetry knowledge and see some of your followers try to wrote poem through your knowledge using. It would be best development to platform. Thank you for inspiration.
Really very cool @d-pend, your poetry can always be a motivation for me. I really like your poetry, because you can create a very beautiful word and you also read with great appreciation so that your poetry can penetrate into the soul as one listens to the poem you read. That's why I always like your poetry and very salute with your work. I have also written a new poem in my article on "Forbidden Love".
I wrote the poem to people who feel about forbidden love, I really hope that with my poetry it can make people who read it can continue the spirit in the matter of romance and not despair. Because I really wanted my poetry it could be a motivation for the crowd. Although now I can not create a good poem like you. Hopefully I will also be successful as you. Thank you and wish you a wonderful day .... :)
And yet another soulful poetry! This calibre of writing is way too beautiful ❤
Celestial
Speechless. Absoulutely Divine. Don't mind me as I literally just sit here and take all this awesomeness and the intense astral vibes in. As if your poem wasn't potent enough.....those forest photos.
Whoaaaaaa and Much Loveeeeeee @d-pend.
Thank you for BEING YOU!
Bright Blessings
@dpend I like it good sir. :)
good job :)
This particular poem of yours is reminiscent of native-American cultures. The tomb in the sky image makes me feel so. There are powerful phrases like "Cull my idle thoughts;". What is transcendental meditation if not culling idle thoughts? My vote.
excellant writing & Beautifull sound thanks for shareing sir @d-pend
Awesome post
Really amazing peom with the beautiful meaning..I think you are profession,really good word and deep meaning and also love your photography @dpend..I enjoy alot.thanks for sharing and looking forward to see your another poem.
Awesome and beautiful poetry you have great writing skills
your poetry is always motivational i love this poetry
Secret feelings that
Protect their existence
From the lips of the profane
this stanza is my favorite from this keep it up god bless you
wow..what a Amazing and very interessing post thank you for sharing
What a lovely poem?it’s so beautiful
awesome poetry , description of nature and life through your poem really amazed and impresseed me . thank you very much for sharing your post .
beautiful poems, continue your dream @ d-pend, I love your poems
full of secret love and emotion.just wow...like it.
Show me the meaning Of your desire; paint inside
My mind in silence the intention.. I love this line... It's so intense and intriguing.. your write-up is brilliant. I can feel that wildness of words wanting to be heard :)
Excelente post, soy nueva de esta gran comunidad espero contar con tu apoyo...
Thank you for this gentle and clear recording.
It's good to see pictures of your turf.
I like what you did with them especially the trees in the sky.
"Desire and intention" are so much a mystery to us on earth today.
The lover seems to have returned home satisfied.
Thank you for throwing this question to my heart now through sky tomb. I cannot say I know more about my spiritual status than anyone else. I cannot say I understand the intentions of the heavens. It is clear that you @d-pend took some time to look up at the sky and considered for a moment the precious gift of life we have. When all is mixed up you put it in words that calm us. How can words produce silence? I am left in awe the moment between dream and awakening.
nice
Man I love these !!
@d-pend is the motivation and words to my pen. I have never been here without learning a new art. You are a genius...Keep it up Boss
Very good pictures nice themes
In the land of the unknown in our world; in a place where ideas, emotions, and sensations usually occur involuntarily; where magical nature and dreams blend; an aesthetic and rhythmic poetry is created. In a dreamscape where the reason for your incarnation could not easily revealed in a perspective that reality is created.
Very deep and beautiful poetry, very touching.
Touching 🙀🙀🙀👍
When we sleep and wake as awoken
Does the new life require a new self?
Do the zephyr of the soul demand recompense?
Sitting on the edge of this wonder
I whisper questions to this wind
Questions with answers long lost
Nice writing. I like the pic too :).
Joy
Good one, 💪
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Show me the meaning
Of your desire; paint inside
My mind in silence the intention
@d-pend you are doing great. Again you came up with a different idea. I appreciate your work
Good production moral
Poet can be interpreted differently by different individual depending on the nature of the Individual mind. To my understanding, the writter is trying to potray a person trying to search the meaning of life.
Hola soy nueva en esta gran comunidad, espero tener su apoyo, como dice el un dicho: El que se arriesga no pierde nada y el que NO se arriesga no gana... Éxito
that's pretty my friend..
Thanks @d-pend this is a very thoughtful and meaningful poem it stimulated my thoughts on life and death. If I may ask, what is the poem writing style that you used for this thought-provoking piece? Tia
I love it. Beautifull poetry
So powerful poetry i love it
Show me the meaning
Of your desire; paint inside
My mind in silence the intention
infact, you showed it everything in hete.. upvoted and resteemed