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RE: Poem - Wave Shaped Walls - Dsound Reading - Freewrite, Prompt - Big wave

in #dsound • 7 years ago (edited)

Love the poem. A wonderful use of words that man!

"I want to go surfing
through adrenaline rushes,
smashed into splinters,
my mind at double speed
as I wipe out and fall,
through icicle water,
a beautiful alarm call."

This was the clincher.

Think about it a bit then set the alarm, ok!?

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     7 years ago  

    Thanks Jay. Yes, I will set the alarm for surf city m8 ;-) Remember North Carolina, Wilmington? I was surfing all day until I got ill, you stayed out in the waves for the rest of the day while I puked my guts up lol

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