Twicely think
Justice maybe living in the desert.
and your sins are like the beast of the sky.
You killed the joy embedded in the smiles.
but whispers
of lightening.
Would one day, give in to shimmering sunshine.
You can pride in ten loaves of bread..
You can throw away morsels and still be fully fed..
You watch stomachs starve..
While your barns can afford to have..
Think twice..
Dreams never die,Thrice..
Warm water will someday turn ice...
You are an elephant today,tommorow you may be a mice..
You can ride on the waves..
And yet you let the storm keeping your friends slave..
You have many acres to spare..
And yet,let that soul freeze in the snow without a home..
Think twice..
Because a cloudless night..
May tommorow become a bright light..
Think twice..
Because today may be beautiful,but tommorow may not just be nice..
Think twice..
Because begger may become kings..
The rejected stones,may soon become cornerstones..
The hopeless ones may one day turn emperor..
One day,your looks may be pathetic in the mirror..
Think twice..
Pheasants may some become pleasant..
Woes may turn out to become joy..
If today, you are king...
Think twice..
Tommorow you may not be able to afford a plastic ring..
Twicely think.
The snow will gnaw for eternity
But eternity is just a piece of imagination.
You could be an emperor.
but slaves may become kings like your very own nightmare.
POETIC ANALYSIS
TWICELY THINK is a didactic poem that tends to admonish the human out there who does not take coigniscance of the fact that there's a future for every situation at hand.
The subject in the poem is a lover of today, he overlooks the suffering of the layman, when he himself is in very good situation to help out.
This poem also basks on the fact that there will be a bright future for people who have been suffering pain in the present.
POEM STRUCTURE
the poem is a nine line miniature stanzas without a specific rhyme pattern it does not have metric arrangement which makes it a free spoken verse.
Written, edited and spoken.
By @JOSEDICCUS
5/3/2018
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I like the analysis, and the poem isn't half bad either!
Thank you a million. 😀😀😀😀😀
Creative poem dear.The concept of speaking too is cool @josediccus
Wao! It is just so beautiful. I like the flow of thought, i like the content and i like the structure. Welldone @josediccus!!!
This poetry meaning is very deep, think 2wice before you act because things change, circumstances change and even the reality of tomorrow is not known. Thanks again for this awesome piece, i love it!!!