Your hardwork Is freaking amazing, I mean the processes are just too brilliant, I never knew you created beats the water lapping and the best boxing with the vocal construction to create that beat is so supernatural.
The Tone of the poem is beautiful, I mean the short short verses combined brought a metric effect to the poem.
If I could sing rivers
Into towers that reach heaven,
And speak with sultry angels
Poised at thin gates:
The beginning was ephiphanic and this stanza here caught my fancy
If I could sing rivers that's beautiful for poetic effect.
Haaaaaaaaaaaa the accent, you nailed it