Your usage of words is truly outstanding. They are woven with such precision and delicacy.
'I am the rider
of the winds;
I am the winds
as they are ridden.'
These lines create such a sense of oneness and completion. You do not fail to express difficulty in ways beautiful beyond imagination. Also, your voice really worked well in the audio version. Keep up this great work, and good luck in the poetry classes!
In the recent week or so, I released my first ever poetry book - self-published. It was a fun process and I'd love to get it out there more. Any helpful tips?