I listened, and dude, you gotta promise me this:
That you'll remember me when you're rich and famous ;P
You're definitely going places - The track is sooo tranquil, just enough base and the voice (your daughter's - very cool) wasn't annoying at all. I'm assuming she has heard it and you've let her play it to all her friends at school?? Hehe.
As for comments, yeah man... I believe truly that the one sure way to be successful on this platform is by adding value to it - through posts, and then, wherever you comment. Add a bit of luck, like your Dsound vote, or my ocd resteem, and you can't lose! =D
Nice note to end off on since I'm about to go read your post about how you feel is the best way to succeed here ;)