It's really interesting to read @cryptoprofessor how you personified Orenda. You captured the feelings of Orenda as the Iraquoi may have felt inside. I love how the words fit together in syllables and rhymes. It is really a piece works well on audio. I feel like you are walking with Orenda in this poem. I'm glad to see you participate in poetry slam and hope that you win first prize.
This is a really good opportunity for poets to engage and I wish more people participated this week. I really enjoy how people respond to the assignment.