If ever 24 hours pass and you see no comment from @mineopoly it doesn't mean that I don't like you. It either means that your piece of heaven was so out of this world that any attempt to comment would be irrelevant or mineopoly is out cold. This time it's both.
You kick ass and after listening to your rap I want to withdraw from @scuzzy's Elysian Poetry slam... but I already won so it's too late for you. Anyway if you entered I wouldn't have a chance.
I love your imagery and identify with the struggle in these words.
Here are my sweat drops of blood.