Reading this in the early morning makes me want to procrastinate more (unhelpful)! I enjoyed reading and listening to the poem. One thing I truly appreciate and like is your extensive use of vocabulary -- I always end up learning new words when reading your work. Thank you for that :3
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You're welcome Jeremy... for the rather verbose lessons ;-) I honestly don't go out of my way to bring complicated words to my poems it is just the way I've always written poetry, I guess my style is more inventive than simple classical style lol. Thanks for reading buddy and I'm glad you enjoyed the surf trip :-)
It does seem natural and not forced, so I get that. Especially when it comes to vocabulary that fits the theme perfectly, it shows a wide knowledge of vocabulary or theme more than anything. :3