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RE: Intermediary Scribe

in #dsound6 years ago

@d-pend,

And it seems that language of this poem is influencing language of the comments,

Amazing, isn't it?

"soothing."

"Meticulously smooth."

"What we understand from the beautiful verse" ... (two for one, both the analytic explanation and the aesthetic appreciation).

"It left an echo of the poem in my head" ... (that's what dopamine does - it creates an "anticipation of the repetition of a pattern").

And, you pulled it off while only employing ballad meter and rhythm (impeccable, by the way) and only one instance of alliteration.

The repeating patterns (fixed meter and rhythm scheme) triggered an involuntary neurological response and this dramatically effected the way people experienced the poem.

There's science behind the art.

BTW ... nice job on the poem. :-)

Quill