Hi @warpedpoetic. I really like the way your poem plays with perception. The main theme of the fear of the sun cleverly plays off our expectations of the fear of the dark, I like the way you flipped it! Also your unique use of language in metaphor:
I am scared of this truth;
The crisp sizzling spark of melting lies,
Of exposed parts, long pinned in the dark.
Really nice poetry :-)
oh thank you sire. I find that light reveals too many things I want to hide. I actually love to sit in the dark and think. I feel safer in the darkness of my room. It feels like a womb for me. I don't know if I am making sense. 😂
Thanks for stopping by though, hope to see you again. Peace.