Original beat: Flughand ~ Canjuu
Sound:
The beat is beautiful and very warm. It flows at a nice pace. No complaints there.
The Vocals sound very cold against the warm beat. I would like to learn how to dampen some of the more harsh tones. I enjoy the pacing and content.
Lyrics: I think I succeeded in my attempt at lifting the atmosphere from a standard rap verse to create minimalist vibe that is still recognizably rap.
Overall Rating: 5
Not my best work, but I enjoy the direction. Lots of mixing at mastering I need to learn.
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You need to figure out how to sustainably raise the volume on tracks, as well.
I enjoy the repetiveness of the "talkin' bout" just before the abrupt pauses. blends the lyrical concept with a defining characteristic of the beat.