Although the sun is my friend i think your poem was well written and engaging. If you dont sin then you will have nothing to hide. As a sun gazer and while looking at the sun I discovered something that I will share with you now...you can forgive yourself my friend. Tomorrow is a new day and a fresh slate. Best wishes.
Hmm... I have no issue with the sun.It is a metaphor for light, for revelation, illumination in the sense that it exposes secrets and lies. I just feel it reveals too much. Everybody has a secret he or she wants hidden.