I love the beauty and rhythm. Your word choice is excellent. I have never surfed but your verse gives me the feel of this and I entered in headfirst!
I want to go surfing
through a sunny dream,
a wave shaped slipstream
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I'm glad that I captured it so well to give you that surfing feeling wandrnrose. It really is like a slipstream of time when your surfing, time fly's by in the blink of an eye as you're so focused on the rythm of the sea and trying to catch a wave. They usually come one out of 3 or 4 and you have to wait and judge it and then when you stand on a perfect wave and barrel toward the shore, wind whipping salt stained brow, the exhilaration is so much more for the waiting. :-)