I think that its great and that it doesn't really represent a tangible message at the same time.. i had to search in it to understand what it is about.. And too little white characters, difficoult too read with the bright red in contrast with black.. I would give it a big Title, rearrange the texts to give it a kind of order and change the background with something that gives a Hint on what you advertise, just from my point of view its a bit confusing, and still didn't really understand what you're offering in the beck end
South Africa. Hey what do you think about my ad?
I think that its great and that it doesn't really represent a tangible message at the same time.. i had to search in it to understand what it is about.. And too little white characters, difficoult too read with the bright red in contrast with black.. I would give it a big Title, rearrange the texts to give it a kind of order and change the background with something that gives a Hint on what you advertise, just from my point of view its a bit confusing, and still didn't really understand what you're offering in the beck end
Thank you so much for this feedback, much appreciated! I hope you have a wonderful day!