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RE: The Scent Of A Man || Author Reading A FreeWrite

in #dtube6 years ago

Fabulous short-story freewrite! Your voice is perfect for narration! The animation was great, too, especially the part where the shadow took her hand and lifted her up a bit! Wow! 😃

My only suggestion is to perhaps lower the volume of the music a bit next time, as it almost overpowered your lovely voice at times!

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Thank you so much for the feedback
Will listen out to audio levels moving forward
Have also included text in the later ones just incaseHey @thekittygirl

And thank you so much for the encouraging words
Yes, I really liked this interpretive dance video too
It was great to work with
<3