That would be totally awesome @irisworld! How old is your niece?
One young lady said it was "smooth," which is totally cool, and may be awesome for a young audience! On your mention of reading to your niece, it reminds me maybe I should send it to my daughter to spread to all the grandkids and my great grand daughter who is 4!
I actually have another short story of something that happened to me at work if you want to read it to her, it's called "The Creek."
https://ecency.com/freewrite/@jamerussell/the-creek
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She is 4 too. And she loves whales, dolphins and all 'big cute fishes' as she calls them :))
Your story is written like a fairy tale. Easy, funny, kind and exciting at the same time. I will share with you my niece's feedback :))
And thanks for sharing another story too. I will read it right now!)
If I can find it in the next couple of minutes I will DM you something on Discord for her, you will like it.