Yes, the first line of the story creates an impact to the story. Same reason why I really liked the story. And you only have five 'yes', putting your climax was really a challenge with sticking to the rule of 1000-3000 words only.
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Were you Amazed?
I am Sir. I finished it in one seating, the thrill of the 5 questions was exciting.