THE SHIT OF THE SHADOW 1/2

in #english7 years ago

Good day steemians this time I bring you a story made by my daughter Francys Sandoval (Future writer from Venezuela) together with me I hope you like it.
Legend has it that in the cool mountains of the plains and the lonely roads, each night of the new moon just at 3:00 in the morning a scream was heard, a heartbreaking, loud cry full of pain, malice and repentance that resounded everywhere terrifying anyone who was in that moment to the end they left but with the memory of that awful moment they lived
Many believed that it was a story that was used to frighten and intimidate children and young people who spent their holidays and came home late to give them the alternative of having to obey their parents if they did not want that to happen to them, but could it be that that legend was true?
Well, there is a little story that has to do with that and maybe clarify your doubts
It all started one morning in a quite reunited and happy town, all were happy chatting, but a group of young people was the one that attracted the most attention since they were talking about a party, they said it was going to be the best party and that caught the attention of many but especially that of a young man who listened with great attention to what they were saying and the idea seemed very interesting to him
-I'll go-said the most interested young man
-What, is it really? -said a girl
-Well, why not? -the boy asked innocently
-Well ... remember what happened in the other you went to
-Oh that, it does not matter and everything is fine-said the boy without much interest
-If it was not only that, but also that of María, Paula, Marcos, Juan, Sofía, Pablo ...
-If I already understood ... I should not drink so much alcohol, but calm everything is fine
-If I'm calm Estefany, Jonh knows how to take care of himself, of course you're going-said another boy
-Thanks Carlos, well I have to go see you at the party-said Jonh before leaving
Walking home young Jonh thought how to convince their parents to go to the party because it was true that Avia gotten into trouble every time I went to but so often it will challenge he did not miss not one, the getting home he found his parents in the living room, his father watching the newspaper and his mother on television
-Mom, dad is coming, he said to get his attention
-Where were you son? -asked the mother
-In the square and guess-said Jonh sitting in an armchair
-What? -the father asked without downloading the newspaper
-Well, at Mariele's house they're going to have a party and I'm going to go -said the very confident boy
"And who gave you permission for that?" Said the father, lowering the newspaper and looking at him seriously.
-Well, you will do it
-Jonh do you think that those scolding and punishments are pure joke? -the mother says a little annoyed- whenever you go to parties everything goes wrong
-If I know but I promise that this time I will not get into trouble
-That is what you always say and how everything ends, in trouble
-Please these are you will not be like that I promise you
-Jonh you can not ...- but before the mother said something else the father interrupted her
-You can go-said the father returning to his magazine
-Inserious? -asked the incredulous boy because of what his father had just said
-Yes but you will have to take your brother -said the father still seeing the newspaper
-What? Why? -the boy complained annoyed

  • Do you want to go or not? If you want to go you'll have to take it away too-says the father
    -Ahs okay- I accept Jonh and went up to his room stomping and throwing the door
    The time of the party had already arrived and almost all the boys were there while Jonh and his brother Williams were walking down the first path that was much longer than the second
    -There are no Williams and I get tired, why did we come for this? The other one is much shorter, "complained Jonh.
    -Don't complain, Jonh, you know I do not like to go for there -said a little scared brother
    -Ha ha ha is really brother, that scares you
    -Well a little but ... ahs and I so I'll tell you keep walking if you want to arrive now -said Williams hurrying up and forward
    When they arrived at the house where the party was being held, there was a knock at the door and a lady who looked a little drunk but let them pass very friendly, there were a lot of people and very strong music, the guitarists playing their fours with so much energy that it would seem that the strings would be broken, people dancing to the beat of the drums, the whole atmosphere looked very happy and happy
    It had already been several hours and some young people were past drinks including Jonh, then a girl had everyone meet
    -I guess you're having a good time, right?
    -Sure-answered some
    -Yes-answered others
    -Well, that's fine, but do not just call them for that, we'll pause the party for a moment and we'll do a little activity, well we'll tell you a story that I imagine everyone already knows, it's ... the cry of the shadow
    In part, groans were heard and partly whistles of joy were heard
    -Well let's start, it all started with the relationship of two couples, a 16-year-old girl and a 20-year-old boy who had a secret relationship since the girl's parents did not allow her to have a boyfriend but she did not pay attention to her parents and went with the boy she loved, the months passed and one day she found out that she was pregnant terrified she went to her beloved's house and told him what was happening the boy told her that it was okay not to worry and that she slept quietly since he accepted it, but it was not true, the young confident went to her house thinking that everything was going to be fine, but the next morning when she went in search of her boyfriend she found out that she had left and I would not go back,the young woman with a broken heart and was destroyed with her parents that upon learning that her daughter is expecting a baby they threw her out of the house and they did not care that she had no place to live, they left her alone with nothing, scared and confused the girl went for a path without any destination, just walked without direction until I hear a noise and stop, suddenly saw a silhouette and was a drunk man and seemed to have bad intentions with her so she ran but the man was faster and when I reached her I nail the knife that he brought with him, leaving the girl bleeding while he went away and so the girl was on the floor screaming and suffering while dying slowly with her baby in her belly,and so he spends all the nights of the new moon terrifying anyone who passes by, "he said finishing with a mysterious and terrifying voice
    First there was a silence for a second until someone spoke loudly, startling some who were close to him.
    -Naaah seriously ?, How boring that thing is very ridiculous-I speak mocking the story
    "You should not make fun of that, Jonh, you know? Some legends are real, "said the girl, challenging him
    -Ja what do you mean? What that thing is going to come at night and I'll pull your feet ?, pff that's just nonsense is ridiculous, you spent your time telling that drivel and I thought this would be more fun I see that I Wrong, said a drunk Jonh
    -Jonh I'm not going to let you come to my house to say that, I'm going to ask you to leave please, "said the girl patiently
    -And if I do not do that? -says challenging her
    -I'll take it out myself-the girl said impatiently, stomping on the floor and glaring at him with her eyes
    -Hey, I'm not going to let ...- said Jonh but he was interrupted by his brother
    -Brother and calm down, we better go, ok? Ok- and literally drag his brother to the exit
    The two brothers left the party to go home but as Jonh was very drunk and deviated from the road forcing his brother to pursue him but Williams did not want to know what that road was the second path where supposedly inhabited that dreadful spirit .
    For those who are interested in the story I will be publishing the second part soon.
    Thank you.