Emotion

in #esteem7 years ago

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Hello, good morning everyone, how are you all this morning? today is the first day we perform fasting and for us, to be honest we feel very happy because in addition to worship, fasting is also a healthy thing to live in if we live it with a sincere heart and sincere, live it all with sincerity, with heart which is clean, so you will gain peace that you will never get in other ways than this.

In fasting, God also tells us to refrain from emotions not just eating and drinking, so I think it is a very good thing for you to do because most of the people today are no longer able to keep their emotions, especially for people which has a high level of emotion, it will be very difficult.

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In fasting, God also tells us to refrain from emotions not just eating and drinking, so I think it is a very good thing for you to do because most of the people today are no longer able to keep their emotions, especially for people which has a high level of emotion, it will be very difficult.
It should be people who instead of people which.