I like how you start the story with the introduction @fromage, these help us to have some insight of the story before we continue reading. And this is one of my favourite scifi story i read. Although I haven't read from chapter 1. But after read this story of yours, I love to read from start. Do you have the part 1 and part 2 link for me to visit?
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Oof, sorry. Updated the post but here they are just in case as well.
Part 1
Part 2
wow I read both part 1 and part 2.. @bennettitalia has started the story nicely then @blueeyes8960 has continue it brilliantly. Three of you have a different style of writing and I love it very much. This is an interesting story and cannot wait on next chapter of it. Anxious to know how the story goes :p