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RE: A Stabbing in New York

in #fiction7 years ago

When it started, I felt I was watching one of those old black and white detective movies... It slowly shifted... ending with a slight CSI scene feel. From the moment, An ice pick rested on top of it. - you knew it was gonna happen (well, from the title itself, but 'that' moment hadn't come yet...) and I was just waiting for when the act would be committed. I just wanted a little bit more at the end though... But good job, especially building the mood up.

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I love the way the story played out in your mind, thank you for sharing that @ackhoo