She looked dead sexy from across the room.
Dressed in a tight black skirt with eyes that can kill.
Will mustered. I venture forth.
I fall under her spell in moments. She's smart and captivating too.
We go to her house. I slip off my clothes asking what she does for work.
"I'm an assassin..."
He struck a note on the guitar and then another.
Melody with a standard blues rift.
He belted out his words like he was letting us hear his broken heart.
He dreamed about the girl that got away living with a man he'd always hate with a smile he'd never see.
Sad eyes sank without her.
Sometimes I just want to remind myself and others I have some chops as a writer too. Not just a memer or a news junkie. I provide these as proof that I can get you hooked in 55 words or less.
Hehehehe this is dope. Really you got skills bro. This piece sounds more like a poem though and a captivating one at that.
I enjoyed every piece of it.
such a beautiful eyes.really she looks sexy.
Lovely story
I love it's brevity
Thanks fot educating us @aggroed
Wonderfully written and well executed. Love the stream of ideas and how many you got me engaged with just 55 or less words. Its really amazing to see people build a imaginary world in just few words.
You did it pretty well. Hope to read more creative writings from your account in future.
Another great off the dome writing. Perspectives, thats THE perfect word to somewhat define this writing.
You've done today's blog post on a great topic, I think it's a good topic to post your blog post.All the things that have been said about the life story and the activities of life, and the activities that have been spoken to the friends are actually very important and very sweet.If you have talked about that matter, it may be something different, but it should not be right, but we think it should be considered a more valuable martyr.
wow..what a beautiful eyes she has..!!..that can kill..and the dress and the story is tremendous..thanks for @aggroed
you are very amazing bro
Lovely post dear @aggroed
Very good story @aggroed the truth I love this kind of stories in which with very few words you can catch the reader...
What a beauty just love it @aggroed
55 words you managed to hypnotize me .., your article like a poet .. how to do this.
in my region (Aceh) if you want to do something extraordinary then you have to suck the cannabis first and then feel like in the dream and from the mouth out the various languages with perfect, hehehe.
You’re good tho. 👍🏻💪🏻
Original work is like gold. Whatever people say first, gold is always be gold. You are in the way to it.
All the love must go to the womens, no matter what.