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RE: Missing Time (An Original Short Story) Part 3

in #fiction8 days ago

A nice and interesting story. I was especially touched by Tim's kindness to the strange woman he met in the elevator. He guessed her unfavourable situation and slipped a sizable amount of money in her pocket. Tim seems an interesting character coupled with the fact he's a veteran.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing and happy Sunday.