Sorry I found this so late, @vanessahampton.
This is an amazing piece of writing. You captured her feelings well... relief, soft safety in the arms of her lover turned to fear, terror, shock, dread etc. Beautifully told.
I haven't been following so I'm not sure if it's part of a bigger story or not. Will follow now. ;)
Thank you so much!
Hi
Thanks for reading
I don't know what you're talking about
What part that I talked about don't you understand, @vanessahampton? My apologies if I was confusing...
It just occurred to me that this may have been the confusing part:
I wrote that because I tried to upvote this post twice earlier... then again just now. It wouldn't allow me to.
Earlier when it happened I looked to see how old the post was and it said 7 days, so I thought it was too close to payout so that was why I couldn't upvote it. Not sure. Don't know.
But that is what that first part of my comment meant.
Ok. I think i was too blunt. I meant the second part. Something about Angelas voice
That's the name of my blog but I didn't say anything about that in my above comment on your story.
Ok. I thought I read something like that towards the end of your comment.
I really appreciate your reading and enjoying my story.