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RE: "Bes" an original work of fiction for the #constrainedwriting contest

in #fiction7 years ago

Gorgeous.

And it's stuffed full of many little mundane bits of life... the 'ordinariness' of hunger pangs and empty cupboards...of dysfunctional families...of traffic jams and environmental degradation...of shopping...of a child crying...of people just watching -how often do we use fear to excuse our inaction?-

... of...I could go on and on...

A hero who happens to be a god, albeit a minor one, steps in and saves the day. And all those uncelebrated heroes who quietly step up in one way or another everyday...

In other words, I truly enjoyed this story :)

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Thank you! For reading and for such a detailed comment. So appreciated! :)

You're most welcome. It was such an easy comment to make.