You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Francis & The Pitfalls of ChilvaryView the full contextView the direct parentboldnessofsouls (18)in #fiction • 7 years ago What do you think of it story-wise?
I don't know if you asked me but that Francis character seems a bit too OP. I prefer when characters win through their wits. I can't say anymore with just this bit.
He remains OP and keeps talking down on everyone he meets. It's like a nagging teacher who doesn't let you have fun. Very unlikable lead.
He's not meant to be likable. And since when does relatability matter to you?
realism>self insert "badass"....wait a second....turkish? wait is bondless the writer?
um...uh...