RE: Sci-fi Novel: The Ultimate Debate - Part 2: Sun Moi's Test With Ogox

[byash]

This part was as intersting as the previous, thanks.
I would want to point out some grammatical errors:-

1. It's been six months and he couldn't ->make<- any significant progress.
2. reutine->routine
   3.Saiki Wakanabe->Saiki Watanabe
   4.now part of the family now->now part of the family.

Comments

[muratkbesiroglu]

I edited them 😎

[lijo]

https://steemit.com/blog/@lijo/my-extra-martial-affair-am-i-wrong

[whymonkey]

I wish I had steemians correctly my grammar like that!! ;) sweet

[steembudy]

I like this part, if possible please post other parts soon, i am wattling rest of part. I like it.